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2ND SCENE IN CHAPTER 12 MY MAIN CHARACTER WILL QUESTION HER REALITY AND WHO SHE IS

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This weekend   I will be diving back into  writing the   12 th  chapter  of my  werewolf   work in progress novel During the Blue Hour.  It will  be the 2nd scene and  my  main character  Sirena’s POV  after    the  whole dance scene  debacle with Adrian. 

Adrian  couldn’t   stop her from dancing in the last chapter.  She was in a  trance .  I don’t think nothing could break her.  I will go into this next scene  with Sirena  starting to question  herself . She basically  missed  time.  The  whole thing in the other  scene  at the end of chapter 11 . She didn’t   know  she was doing it.  

She is already  questioning  her sanity  with the whole not  sure she saw  werewolves and her  friend Gaby  in the mountains  thing.  And  now she will start to question her own reality and  the truth of who she really is. 

In my  first draft  I wrote  that in early on  but in this  draft  I don’t  know why I  hold off  to write  it in  until  these  later chapters. She doesn’t even get  the time to read her father’s journal yet which  reveals all her family’s  secrets.

Each time she  gets ready to read the journal . She gets distracted  in the  scene.  And now she   doesn’t even have the journal.  Adrian has it.   And he holds  all the answers  to  the truth of her secrets. Even when  Cristen had   the journal. He didn’t even read the journal.

In this scene she won’t  get to read the journal.

She won’t  even find out who she  is.

She will be hiding and running  away.   Because her mother  kept the promise   that she would turn her into Unitus(the human government of my world) if   Sirena went to the dance recital.  And well she did go and dance.  Sirena  will get  caught   sooner or later  just  not in this scene. 

In  the mists of the chaos that goes on in this scene she will be found by Eli  and they will quickly evade  the Spider Agents(police)  start their journey into the mountain  to find Gabby.  

If you liked this blog post and you want to  see more content involving my work in progress During the Blue Hour Follow , Like , share  . But first  LET’S START A DIALOGUE

DOES ANY OF  YOUR CHARACTERS  QUESTION THEIR  REALITY OR DOUBT THEMSELVES ?

 I  want to know so let me know in the comments  below.

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