This Shiny Relic; Safyral : A Scene in the 13th Chapter

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Oh Isohel,Oh Isohel. THE VOICE FROM  ABOVE

A creepy prayer  and a  race  to survive . This is what  my  main  character  Sirena  faces in  this 3rd  scene of  my 13th chapter .  Yup . I’m not finished quite yet with the chapter but  I ‘m getting there and  it feels great . 

So all last week and the  week before  I had writers  block( you can read more about that in the post WRITERS  BLOCK  IN THE 13TH  CHAPTER.   And as you know  writers  block is  not  great tohave or let alone  healthy .  But I  managed to pull through for now.  I got  a lot  written as far as  the  scene goes.

The scene that I finished is called  This Shiny  Relic ; Safyral .  It’s not a new scene as it was in my 1st draft . The only difference is that I  switched it around where  it is in a new chapter and  I added  Sirena’s friend Eli to the  scene.   

WHAT  HAPPENS IN THIS SCENE ?

Scene  summary :

In the last scene  Sirena had  to make a choice  to run from the werewolves .  So  she ran  .   In this scene  she comes back to save her friend Eli but  is suddenly approached by  her mother’s  fiancé  Anthony.

Anthony  a  doctor in the  town is really  not who he appears to be but  in fact  a  Castus  Healer werewolf Hunter .  He tells  Sirena  he didn’t  know at first  she was  a werewolf  but  then  realized  that she was one  after  she became attracted  to the  a shiny relic  called  a safyral that was hidden away in  his desk in a  previous scene. 

He then attacks her with  the Safyral telling her  that he will try to save from being a beast , her so her mother, him , Sirena and her sister can all be a proper family . 

WHAT IS THE  SHINY RELIC  CALLED  A SAFYRAL?

The shiny relic called a safyral; the sword of burning hearts,  a  healing dagger that has been blessed to cut through the stomach which is poisonous to the caninruh after it has been blessed. is  a dagger sword  that  when blessed  is used  to exorcise  or cut out the  heart of the  werewolf in  order to heal them  so  they  will be able to be  mortal.

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WHAT  IS  A CASTUS  HEALER  WEREWOLF HUNTER?

Are usually  natural healers and exorcist priest who believe in curing the caninruh of their evil spirits by cutting out the heart,  through their stomach in order to cure them. Afterwards they sow the stomach up.   They live and hunt in the FOREST mountainous regions of RED SILVA MOUNTAIN .  They are perceptive and possess very strong tracking skill , using the luring, and calling  method  of hunting and usually The CASTUS men are the only ones who can perform the exorcism and the woman are usually the ones who trap and hunt the caninruh.  At the Castus ceremony  they say a prayer  and bless the  dagger  sword  and  the  soul. 

WHAT  IS  THE CASTUS PRAYER ?

The castus prayer  to bless the Safyral  relic   is called  THE VOICE OF ABOVE .  This is the  prayer:

Oh Isohel,Oh Isohel. THE VOICE FROM  ABOVE .I offer  you this reaping. This cutting, this oath of banishment from evil by the Safyral, the sword of burning hearts so you can deliver a rebirth of a fallen messenger and finally  grant  us salvation for this weak one.  oh Isohel, cut, bless, curse and   cast away the beast within this weak soul! Throw it upon the Rigel and Star of Eridu. Eridu , oh  celestrial  Isohel . I summon you  and all the father and mother Isohels. All the celestial forces of Eridani. All the travlers of time itself.  Arcus  Auroria , PSI  Tau. Ori .  from  Valgrind to the realms of Camara.  Pulṓn. the sanctums of Eridanus.Grant  salvation ! Banish this Evil!  Oh celestial Isohel Eridu benedico maledire sacrum dominus. Oh Isohel,Oh Isohel. THE VOICE FROM  ABOVE.”

I do not  necessarily put the prayer within this particular  scene but  I do in the next  and  briefly in a scene  in the upcoming chapters. 

Anthony  is the only  Castus  that the reader  will see  through this first novel  and  I  will continue  to explore the  Castus society throughout future  novels between Sirena and  the other  characters.

As for  whether  Sirena  will survive  in this scene.?  Well  yes  of course  or there will  not  be a book .  The real  question  is how  and that  is what I continue  to explore in the next scene of this   chapter . 

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WHAT IS THE DAGGER OF MEMORIES?

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What’s important about this dagger?

The next chapter.  Chapter  13  is  the beginning  of  all the real action for Sirena. This chapter will reveal  a lot of   things.

Sirena and Eli  with  go up  the mountain in search for Gabby.  But in the mist  of their search they will get lost  and separated from  each other  due to a snow storm . Sirena  will find Gabby’s  dead body and will be intercepted by a familiar adversary. Adrian will reach Sirena in time before  the rest of the  pack and defeat Sirena’s adversary  but while defeating  the  person it brings  back  terrible memories of his past .

So that right there is the chapter 13  synopsis  .    

The  questions that  are  going to be addressed  based off the synopsis is

  • Who  is Sirena’s adversary? Helene?
  • What is Adrian so haunted  by in his past? And why will defeating  the  adversary  and saving  Sirena  bring   those  memories  to the forefront.   

I  Will  keep  you posted as  I write the chapter  and   give   you a few  hints as  I go   along.  

But one hint  I will give you now is the title to this chapter.

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WHAT QUESTIONS ARISE  IN YOUR CHAPTER  13  THAT YOU ARE EITHER READING OR WRITING ?

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WRITERS  BLOCK  IN THE 13TH  CHAPTER

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I  haven’t posted in like two weeks  but it’s not  because I have abandoned  my blog.  It’s because I kind of had writers  block  for this thirteenth chapter .  Even though  I know what I’m going to write  there  are still moments  where things  get mixed up and  out of place.  

Writers  block is not fun.  I’m sure you as a writer have  faced  it as  well.  And I  hate writers  block because all the  inspiration  and ideas are  sucked  out of you and well  are blocked .  So what did I do?

So  I  had to wait  a moment or two , clear my head and kind of  back track on  what  I wrote. 

It  has  brought me to  rewriting , adding and switching around a lot of things just so it can  all make sense.  Because the 3rd  scene  within the 13th chapter  I couldn’t  write at first . But now since I  went  back to the  first  scene where  I added and corrected  a couple  of  sentences  it  will  all flow  together now. 

My  advice for writers block  is just back track and read through  what you wrote because it could be  maybe a single sentence that creates  your writers block. 

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HOW HAVE YOU OVERCOME WRITERS BLOCK?

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